well i liked it..... we all know what happened three years ago but life has shown me that what you least expect to happens sometimes happen. great writing and i hope like hell you continue it..... i might have to dust off my writing skills and attempt to come up with something....
Rihanna and Chris' personalities are just wrong in this story. Rihanna is never that submissive to ANYONE so its difficult to find her believable. this Rihanna is extremely indecisive, weak and like, cries. the real Rihanna is strong, decisive, just as stubborn as Chris and intelligent. she wouldn't easily be pushed around the way this one allegedly is. and Melissa...she's 'best friend'. I don't think she'd go around disapproving of everything Rihanna does like that. Chris, I don't know, from his songs, I think his lovemaking would be less selfish, more about giving orgasms than getting them. and I think he would enjoy the shit talking. Basically, its more of a recap after chapter 3, than a story. and when two people are going at it, they're not thinking about their megastardom status. So I'd say less of the 'the superstar' business and more of the 'two people in love, conflict and lust' business.
OH MY GOD!!! You are such a good writer. The way you use facts that we know happened with your interpretation of what else could have happened is so amazing. I HOPE you update soon, cause you have left me hanging and I don't know what to do with myself right now.
Hunni...... I don't know why I haven't been leaving my reviews and thoughts on the story but I have got to tell you.... if Mr. Brown and Ms. Fenty even remotely did anything like that on stage my ass will combust and die while I'm watching the clips..... better yet if there was a possibility of them ever performing together I'm maxing out somebody's credit card and my ass will be there. That whole Supafest performance was amazing! And Mel's handling of the kept and her sidekick was perfect.... I laughed the entire time.... loved it! Can't wait to read the next chapter and just gotta say.... Amazing writing and I will stalk until a new chapter is posted!
I LOVE YOU!!! I wish I was really good with words so I could express to you how much I love you for writing this story! I love how Rihanna handled Seiko and Karache(IDK how to spell or pronounce her name)She so is the Queen of Shade.
I agree with you that Chris is being a little BITCH, I thought I was the only one who saw it. Chris has been shading her left and right and yet he's going to perform Birthday Cake!?! What the fuck is that? But on to your story, I love the fact that Jay Z's plan has backfired (That's what he get for being a fuck nigga) I hope Chris really does dump Karreche(IDK I hope that's how you spell it)and him and Rihanna can be together. I just really look forward to your updates, I always loved fanfiction but it was always about book characters or movie and TV characters, I rarely read celebrity stories because I felt the author never captured the celebrity right, but you're amazing I thing you have Chris and Rih on point. Can't wait for your next update!!
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