I just read the first chapter of your story,
sounds really interesting.
But the german sentences are really funny, actually. ;-)
I´m from germany, so I wrote down the
correct translations for you:
Bist du verletzt? = what's your damage?
Warum kriechst du hier alleine herum? = Why were you creeping around here alone?
Was zum Teufel ist hier los? = What the hell is going on?
Du hast den Verstand verloren = You have lost your mind
Sie ist meine Seelenverwandte = She is my soulmate
Warte, woher weißt du das? = Wait, how do you know ?
Have you seen them live? I never have, but i´m waiting for my next oppertunity... :-)
I didn't get a chance to review throughout the previous 7 chapters but I figured it'd be a little tedious if I did that now. Love it by the way. Not wanting to sound judgemental but some of sentences (out of the whole first 8 chapters I read) looked like they needed a little fixing but other than that nothing I couldn't read or understand. This story is kind of inspiring me to hurry and write my stuff faster :)
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