I found the start of this story to be different from your other work that you have done in the past, very intriguing plot that will have anyone trying to guess the story direction! Well done. I can not wait for the second installment! Thank you for sharing your craft with others!
I am thoroughly intrigued. I like alot of plot with my twincest *laughs* Usually it's just PWP, so you have successfully caught my interest.
You're extremely visual with your writing. I can see everything you describe in my head as I read, as if I'm in the room, watching the scene play out. It's something alot of people usually struggle with but you manage it flawlessly.
You've kept me wondering as well, I find myself asking questions.
Please update this soon, curiosity is my biggest weakness
I can't wait to see Tom's reaction...
Hey, RussianDoll here in my actual sign-in that I managed to sink my greedy claws into once again. I have the memory of a sieve, remembering passwords isn't a skill I'm well trained in, but, I digress! Fabulous chapter, absolutely bloody marvellous. You're characters are so in-depth. Each little personality trait you add makes me deconstuct and re-evaluate their personalities. Most people tend to make a character a two sided coin, one extreme or the other.
I'm completely smitten with this story, it's no secret. Tom's reaction to his surprise little phone call was exactly how I would imagine him reacting. Down to the letter. Tom strikes me as a person who likes to deal with problems personally, some might call it a hot-head attitude, react first and think later, but a situation he's practically helpless in? He's pretty much snared already. Had this happened the other way around and our mystery kidnapper had attempted to take Tom instead, this would be a completely different kettle of fish. Our kidnapper is intelligent. I'm guessing he already knows how it's all going to pan out...
I'm liking feisty Bill. You can't be a teenage rockstar without a little diva and some tantrums. This sudden backbone after he got over the initial shock of the kidnapping, well, you can't blame me for thinking it's sexy. Even Mr. Kidnapper (I just love calling him that) can't keep his hands off the little minx *grins* The anticipation is eating me alive! I'm a nosy little bitch, I have to know everything, and my curiosity is piqued! I can't wait for the next thrill...
I just read part 3 of this enthralling story and of course, enjoyed it! Working in the security industry I can appeciate the in-depth description of use of weapons,armour and combat techniques decribed within, great stuff. This particular story would have lost my interest if it was just another typical fluffy story! Well written Rina! Your detail does you justice here!
What a way to appeal to the manly men.
I wanna cuddle somebody...*sobwail* Really really wanna!
My life's pretty much been on pause waiting for this. That reunion was beautiful. Kinda makes me wish I had a twin but then, I'd revoke that wish. I'm too annoying to be two people. The world would rebel.
Why is Koji so kickass? I mean really? Not that I approve of him choking our beloved dreadhead, although my inner sadist argues that the submission was hawt *grin* and it was, but still he never seems to lose it. He lost it more with Bill than he did with Tom. I thought it would be the other way around. I imagine that's only because he expected retaliation from Tom.
And speaking of our favourite guitarist, I love how vulnerable you made him in this chapter. I'm sure I've said before that I love it when Bill shows some backbone, so to see him protecting and comforting Tom, it makes me happy. And uncuddled...
Cuddles *grabby hands* I wants cuddles!
Aiiii *tacklehugs you* If it were my fantasy, I'd be in Koji's shoes too. Hmm, nothing like a little roughing up to get the passion stirring. I feel so bad for Koji. Everything he said in this chapter drove his point home. His loneliness and pain. I'm developing Stockholm Syndrome and I'm not locked in an underground basement *grins* He's also very witty. Thumbs up for the sarcasm! I above all can appreciate that little trait. Sarcasm is my ambrosia XDDD
Part of me is being extremely impatient. I want to know what's going to happen and I want to know now. Fortunately, the side of my brain labeled common sense is telling the side of my brain labelled impulsive maniac, to calm the heck down and wait for the rest of the story. I need to know, but I also want the story to unfold at its own pace, a beautifully sculpted work of literature to tease my senses. And it's teasing quite well so far >>
Thankyou for the dedication my lovely. I am much appreciative! *snuggles* Impulsive brain wants more >
Hey hey, sorry I didn't review last time. Could have sworn I did. Obviously not if it's not here. One thing I noticed, you put down that Bill has fine black hairs on his arms and...other places perhaps. He's a natural blonde lol, he's a kitten with mixed fur XD I haven't seen Brokeback Mountain. You'd think I would have but I haven't. Cowboys, even gay cowboys really aren't my thing. Maybe you can get me to watch it when I visit? Who knows, tie me up I may co-operate XD
Boy-touching. Yes please. A world of yes please! They're touching and eating. That means they're becoming a little more comfortable. And the lotion thing >> I totally do that XD It's not even funny. But I'll never be able to look at it in the same light ever again!
Update soon, withdrawals are a bitch! Love ya!
Oh tasty yummy stuff indeed. So here's where it starts to get down to it. I'm sure Koji is near bouncing aobut in excitement, or rather not. Too dignified for bouncing? It would seem so. Someone needs to tell Bill and Tom that smoking is a filthy habit. And not the sort of filthy habit I encourage either. Pumpkin risotto? Where do you get this stuff from XD It's like you're scanning menu's and plotting fanfiction at the same time. And the private Tommy-time session? Hawt o.o But then, we all knew that XD Tom and his five finger free time is a hit with me! Keep going, or you know I'll pout at you n.~
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