Ohmigosh I enjoyed this so very much. I was startled when I reached the end of chapter four because I felt like I had only just finished with chapter one. I think on of my favorite parts was the fact that you translated some things right away. Most people have keys at the begining or end of a chapter. It's really annoying to be into a story and have to stop reading to look up a word or phrase just so you know what's going on. I felt so sorry for the girl at the end of chapter four. I hope things get better now that she's under Miyavi's care. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Wow, this is one of the best Myv fics I've seen in a while. I so can't wait to see what you write for the next chapter. I hope things turn out ok for her and Miyavi. Ooh, this waiting is already killing me!!
you know, i didn't really think that I would like this, but I really do. sadly, it seems as though you have abandoned it...is there any hope for future chapters?
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